re: R.I.P. 'Platinum'

Angelina — Sun, 11 Jan 2009 20:10:48 GMT

badly need your help. Man is the only animal that can remain on friendly terms with the victims he intends to eat until he eats them.
I am from Japan and also am speaking English, please tell me whether I wrote the following sentence: "Diane will give you one on one support and the benefit of her experience to maximize your home."

Best regards :-D, Angelina.